Mrs McGuinniety read us the Dr.Seuss story. My Many Coloured Days. I wrote my own colour feelings poem.
Use adjectives to describe how you could feel and match it to a colour.
Use capital letters and full stops.
Use “WOW” words.
Attempt 1
Did you know your feelings can be colours.?
Some days I am yellow and some days I am blue.
Today I am yellow having a happy day on other days I could be brown which is a very lazy and tiring day.
On different days I could be pink. A pink day is it is all about me I am the show pony I get all the attention.
Or I could be green a very jelous day like I want her shoes I want them.
Then all of a sudden I am blue I am having a sad and confused day.
Then I am red very angry and grumpy.
Maybe I am grey depressed or purple very lonely and by myself.
Sometimes I am having an orange day a very “meh” kind of day an alright day.
But in the end I go back to being me.
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Attempt 2
Did you know your feelings can be colours.?
Some days I am yellow and some days I am blue.
Today I am yellow having a exciting day like a buzzy bee flying through the air. On other days I could be brown which is a very lazy and exhausting day.
On different days I could be pink. A pink day is it is all about me I am the show pony I get all the attention.
Or I could be green a very jelous day like I want her shoes I want them.
Then all of a sudden I am blue I am having a sad and confused day.
Then I am red very furious and grumpy.
Maybe I am grey depressed or purple very lonely and by myself.
Sometimes I am having an orange day a very “meh” kind of day an alright day.
But in the end I go back to being me.
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Attempt 3
Did you know your feelings can be colours?
Some days i’m yellow and some days i’m blue.
Today i’m yellow buzzing around like a bizzy buzzy bee.
On different days I could be pink. A pink day is it is all about me I am the show pony I get all the attention.
Other days I could be brown then I feel slow and low, low down like i’m under ground.
Or I could be green deep down in the sea wanting everything like being me when i’m green.
Then all of a sudden I am blue drop drip drop as the tears slither down my cheek and make a puddle of sadness.
Then I have a red day I am stomping through the town like a furious dragon breathing fire.
Maybe I am grey everything stops and I watch but nothing moves today as I am grey.
I have a purple day I moan as I walk down the road alone.
But it all turns out alright you see in the end I go back to being me.
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